MY ENGLISH PROGRESS

My first post of this blog was in 2013, when I was doing fourth of ESO with Sonia, two years ago. I've read it and I realized that I commited various mistakes that now I wouldn't make at all. I has so much fun reading my first post in this blog because it reminds me a lot of memories.
My first log post was: 'My dream: be an actror', and it talks aout my dream when I was fifiteen yo. For example, my mistakes were: 'If i can be a real actor, my challenges are very difficult to solve.' corrected is : If I could be a real actor... would be very difficult to solve'. Another mistake: ' i will can do distance classes.' COrrected is: I'll be able to do distance classes'. LINK FIRST POST
Also, I made mistakes of structure, like starting to explain without writing an introduction before. I made mistakes with the photo because I placed it a little bit too near from the text, and it's too big. Also, i wasn't too critical and reflective, normal in fourth of ESO. But i used one word that I didn't remember since I checked it on the dictionary: 'cram', I didn't remember this word, but then when i wrote the post I did, so that shocked me a little bit.
I see a personal development in my writings and compositions, I use more complex words and grammar. I include my progression with the oral presentations. also: I improved a lot with the oral presentations mostly with the pronunciation and the vocabulary used, and I also improved because I'm not that shy as in my first presentation, i learnt minimally how to express

Now that I realized my mistakes in the past, it's time to see to improve more in the future. This mistakes were very common in ESO, then in fist batxillerat I improved, and now I improved more, and that's how it goes on, you never stop learning new things.

China bans 'erotic' banana-eating live streams

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Chinese lives-streaming services have banned people filming themselves eating bananas in a seductive fashion. The poeple who film themselves doing erotic things for some are now banned as other erotic filmings, according to the New Express Daily. The authorities now are trying to clamp down (posar accions dràstiques) on inapropiate and erotic online content. This filiming sessions are mostly of girls under 18 years old and most of them chinese, that's why in China these type of videos are so popular among lives-streaming. Three quarters of the people who watch these videos are males.
I think that these type of videos sometimes are very erotic and should be banned from the public internet, but I would let that people who pays some money could watch these videos, as long as people who don't want to watch it don't watch it, I'd have no problem with that.

Video shows Afghan woman's 'Taliban execution'

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A video has emerged where apperas an afghan woman beeing killed after an informal said that she killed her husband. In the video appears that the taliban shots her in the back of the head, ans she feels to the floor dead.  This video has spread on social media around. The taliban used to publicy execute woman in de 1990s.  In August 2011 a similar killing happened were the woman eloped (fugar-se) from his husband, ans he had been stoned to death. Last year happened a similar killing, were a woman accused for adultery (adulteri) had been stoned ( lapidada) to death too. 

The murder triggered protests across the country and led to global condemnation of the treatment of Afghan women.

 

Patrick Ekeng: Dinamo Bucharest and Cameroon midfielder dies after collapse

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Ekeng, a football player, fell to the floor on the 70th minute of a league match between Dinamo and Viitorul. He was carried to the hospital but died two hours later although they tried to revive him. The Camenoorian FA confirmed his death on Friday, while his former club tweeted: 'We have no words to express our sadness at the lost'. Afetr his dead, the Fifa president read about this lost and said that all the messages are regarding Patrick Ekeng forever, that this lost will me regarded for all time. I fell very sorry for this lost, when I realized it I was like 'WOW', I've never seen something like this. A very similar thing happened in 2003, where a Cameroon foe died after collapsing during a match against Colombia in France.

The chasm cutting an Antarctic base adrift

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The meteorologist Peter Gibbs, that work in the section of weather in the BBC, returned to the arctic to explore the chasm (abyss) to threatining to cast it adrift (a la deriva). His words say that is feels like another planet even when the sun is shining. This abyss  has 100 m wide. The Wedell Sea oozing (es traspua)  He's going to climb up this huge abyss to the top, and he reminds hisself 36 years ago when hee first went to the at place being more fit in that time.

'Perfect storm' of El Niño and warming boosted Alberta fires

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The dry weather have been one of the facts and that increased the effects of the wildfire in Alberta. according to scientists, this wildfire have been caused by the dry weather and El niño, a phenomenom that causes a drier weather and a lows the percentage of rains per month.

However, scientists confirm that El niño have not been the only cause of this wildfire that have caused bad effects on the province. This effect is the global warming, as expected. The global warming is rising the global temperatures by 1 degree, and this directly rise the probability of wildfires. The dry winter caused by global warming is one of the two facts that caused the wildfire, and the other one is El niño, that also makes a drier weather and wind changes.

Space X records another rocket landing

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This rocket returned to a drone ship off the Florida coast because it was travelling to a high velocity tha it couldn't land on earth. Now, Space X say that this high velocity must be reduced in the future because sending a satellitie from the falcon-9 rocket is a difficult performance to do, and that energy that then has to be removed when landing. One of the of the most important causes of this prpbolem was the extra loading that the rocket had and also the heating of the components. However, this rocket has sometimes been able to land in the platform without having to land on the sea.
Space X now are trying to solve this problem and make that the landing platform will be a very frequent place to land for the outer flying things.